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original fiction: Tin Man [1/16] - Diary of a Necromancer
Excuse me, I'm making perfect sense, you're just not keeping up
original fiction: Tin Man [1/16]
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robling_t From: robling_t Date: June 9th, 2010 05:01 am (UTC) (permalink this entry)
I haven't made an emotional committment because there's nothing in the first chapter that has tugged at my emotions.

The interesting catch-22 with that, as it happens, is that his affect is actually supposed to be a deliberate element of the story (and you're not the first person to bounce off it over the point); I'd really have to say try giving the rest of it a go if just for the sake of getting the critical-perspective on it as writers, 'cos the question of how to address that issue more effectively within the text would be better served tackling it from the end where I can say, "so, where does it go wrong when I'm trying to make it do X..."
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